Can someone explain to me why, when I stumble upon a blog with a poem like this on it:
I loved you,
once
but no more
for you.
You wounded my
heart
and killed
love
for me.
Where can I
go? Now.
You see
me.
I want to vomit, a lot? I shouldn't criticize because I know the blogosphere is all about getting it out, honey. But, damn, how much bad poetry do we need in the world? Please, if some sceeze broke your heart, just say so. In plain words, without sentences that break off in odd places. And then write another post.
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